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Friday 11 March 2016

Bradley Titanium Music Video

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As a class we have discussed some possible words and similes to describe what has happened so far in the video.


  1. Write a descriptive paragraph paragraph of what has happened so far in the video. Write it from the point of view of the boy.



Start your paragraph here. I was at school when I woke up the school was trashed and it was so scary they were book everywhere and the door was broke they were glass everywhere I stand up I walk then I saw the teacher her name was Miss Block what  on the phone then she close the door  so then I ran outside the police were there so then I stole the bike I ride fast I was angry I saw ladies running I stop at my house the tv said Supernatural occurrences at local school the police was stand at the door was went to my room and pack my suffy I tried to open the back door but it was lock so the police came in the grab the key with powers I went through the back door I ran through the forest when I got then the police saw me so then I ran but the police push me so then they try to shoot me but then I did my power I they died The End         
    

2 comments:

  1. Hi Bradley I like you paragraph because it all about power\
    by. Siokita

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  2. Hi Bradley I like you paragraph because it all about power\
    by. Siokita

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