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Wednesday, 16 March 2016

Bradley I Spy

 Walt Read on when i come to an unknown word and think what makes sense?

Friday, 11 March 2016

Bradley Identifying T.O.P.S

Identify the T.O.P.S of the following narratives.


T
Title - What is the title of your story
O
Orientation - Sets the scene with who, what, where, when.  Captures the reader’s interest.
P
Problem - What problem or issue disrupts normal life and needs a response from the character(s).
S
Solution  - How is the problem solved or attempted to be solved.



T
O
Orientation The characters are goldilocks and the three bears. It is set in the forest
P
Problem
S
Solution













T
Title  - Frozen.
O
Orientation Elsa Anna Arendelle
P
Problem she was afraid dance with him. So he said we can’t marry.  
S
Solution  she had turned to solid ice   


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Title  
O
Orientation
P
Problem
S
Solution

Bradley Titanium Music Video

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As a class we have discussed some possible words and similes to describe what has happened so far in the video.


  1. Write a descriptive paragraph paragraph of what has happened so far in the video. Write it from the point of view of the boy.



Start your paragraph here. I was at school when I woke up the school was trashed and it was so scary they were book everywhere and the door was broke they were glass everywhere I stand up I walk then I saw the teacher her name was Miss Block what  on the phone then she close the door  so then I ran outside the police were there so then I stole the bike I ride fast I was angry I saw ladies running I stop at my house the tv said Supernatural occurrences at local school the police was stand at the door was went to my room and pack my suffy I tried to open the back door but it was lock so the police came in the grab the key with powers I went through the back door I ran through the forest when I got then the police saw me so then I ran but the police push me so then they try to shoot me but then I did my power I they died The End         
    

Wednesday, 9 March 2016

Friday, 4 March 2016

Bradley Haunted House

Lanzie and Bradley were exploring their new town after school one day. At the end of the cemetery there was a gloomy hill with a broken down house sitting on top. They heard a scream. Billy was shaking in his boots to the end of the cemetery gloomy hills Billy Started to shaking his boots they saw a haunted house it was busted down on top of it. Bradley said “Let's go inside.” Billy said “no silly i’m scared.” Billy ran home but bradley decided to exploring the haunted house Bradley’s Legs was shaking Bradley went to the haunted house when he went inside it show blood on the wall it was i’m Jake the ghost Bradley was scared so bradley decided to get out but the door was lock so bradley went to the room he see a window bradley grab the chair and smash the window. The window shattered bradley left his bag behind bradley grab his phone and his suffy that he needed some bradley jump out of the window bradley went home. In the morning bradley had breakfast then bradley went to billy house. Billy lives across the road bradley went to pick her up for school they walk to school Billy said what happened Bradley said nothing so then walk to school after school Bradley went to the Haunted house again to look for his school bag Bradley went inside he ran to the room his bag wasn't  they so Bradley went upstairs his bag was not then. So then he bradley ran out the window but bradley fell down and then the ghost killed him The end.