Bradley Writing a Narrative 2

Every picture tells a story. Use your imagination and experience to narrate (tell) a story about this photo.

T	Title - What is the title of your story
O	Orientation - Sets the scene with who, what, where, when.  Captures the reader’s interest.
P	Problem - What problem or issue disrupts normal life and needs a response from the character(s).
S	Solution  - How is the problem solved or attempted to be solved.

Use the following table to plan your writing.

T	Laughing Jack and the Ghost. Part 1. The ghost of the forest
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there was a boy call John he went home from school. It was at night time he got lost in a forest. He was calling for ‘’Help’’ he went to hide. It was late 12.00Pm John was still in the forest. After a while John got out of the forest but this time he saw a hunter house. He Go in inside john said ‘’Hello’’ John walking upstairs to the second room then he open the door inside was empty but then John saw a mirror there was blood it said Laughing Jack i’m coming to get you. John starting to run downstairs to the  door  was lock john try to open the door the ghost is coming then john kick the door john ran fast he ran to the forest.It was late 2:00 in the morning john ran to the forest and slept.

8:00Am John woke up he went to school. When he went to school the school was close john saw the note it said the school is closed for 22 Days John saw a die body it was his friend Jacob he saw blood on his arms it said laughing jack. John ran to his house the police were there john said what happened the policeman said your Mum and Dad die john said who did it the policeman said laughing jack and the ghost. The Police said you have to go Australia So then we move to Australia to live with his cousin.