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Friday, 4 March 2016

Bradley Haunted House

Lanzie and Bradley were exploring their new town after school one day. At the end of the cemetery there was a gloomy hill with a broken down house sitting on top. They heard a scream. Billy was shaking in his boots to the end of the cemetery gloomy hills Billy Started to shaking his boots they saw a haunted house it was busted down on top of it. Bradley said “Let's go inside.” Billy said “no silly i’m scared.” Billy ran home but bradley decided to exploring the haunted house Bradley’s Legs was shaking Bradley went to the haunted house when he went inside it show blood on the wall it was i’m Jake the ghost Bradley was scared so bradley decided to get out but the door was lock so bradley went to the room he see a window bradley grab the chair and smash the window. The window shattered bradley left his bag behind bradley grab his phone and his suffy that he needed some bradley jump out of the window bradley went home. In the morning bradley had breakfast then bradley went to billy house. Billy lives across the road bradley went to pick her up for school they walk to school Billy said what happened Bradley said nothing so then walk to school after school Bradley went to the Haunted house again to look for his school bag Bradley went inside he ran to the room his bag wasn't  they so Bradley went upstairs his bag was not then. So then he bradley ran out the window but bradley fell down and then the ghost killed him The end.  

 

Wednesday, 24 February 2016

Bradley Writing a Narrative 2

Every picture tells a story. Use your imagination and experience to narrate (tell) a story about this photo.

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Title - What is the title of your story
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Orientation - Sets the scene with who, what, where, when.  Captures the reader’s interest.
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Problem - What problem or issue disrupts normal life and needs a response from the character(s).
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Solution  - How is the problem solved or attempted to be solved.

Use the following table to plan your writing.


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Laughing Jack and the Ghost. Part 1. The ghost of the forest  
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there was a boy call John he went home from school. It was at night time he got lost in a forest. He was calling for ‘’Help’’ he went to hide. It was late 12.00Pm John was still in the forest. After a while John got out of the forest but this time he saw a hunter house. He Go in inside john said ‘’Hello’’ John walking upstairs to the second room then he open the door inside was empty but then John saw a mirror there was blood it said Laughing Jack i’m coming to get you. John starting to run downstairs to the  door  was lock john try to open the door the ghost is coming then john kick the door john ran fast he ran to the forest.It was late 2:00 in the morning john ran to the forest and slept.


8:00Am John woke up he went to school. When he went to school the school was close john saw the note it said the school is closed for 22 Days John saw a die body it was his friend Jacob he saw blood on his arms it said laughing jack. John ran to his house the police were there john said what happened the policeman said your Mum and Dad die john said who did it the policeman said laughing jack and the ghost. The Police said you have to go Australia So then we move to Australia to live with his cousin.     

Thursday, 4 February 2016

2015/2016 Reflection

1.2015 was awesome  because I like camp. My favorites part about camp was when we went to the pools I was sleeping was Lanzie and Angelo.

2. We had jump jam in the Morning and Breakfast we play games and on the last day of camp we went to Manurewa pools it was so fun.  
My Favorites subject in was Maths. What I like about Maths is times. I was in room 7 my teacher was Mr S. My favorites thing about 2015 was Sports I Play Rugby. We Vs Kings. Kings was easy.


3.My friend are cool they name are Lanzie and Patrick. Lanzie is cool and funny and Patrick is cool. But in Year 6 we had to run 2 laps. Being a year 6 is cool. I'am a year 7 this year I Am in room 2 my teacher is Miss Clark . What I'm looking forward for this year is to be to be good and don’t be naughty.